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Post by Psychoness on Sept 29, 2006 18:58:05 GMT -5
Yup.
It's been awhile since I've used that word.... xD
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Post by Anriasia on Sept 29, 2006 19:09:32 GMT -5
Lol, I think you'll fit right in!
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Post by rage on Sept 30, 2006 18:32:40 GMT -5
... Okay!
Coolio.
So when does he write more?
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Post by Anriasia on Sept 30, 2006 18:56:13 GMT -5
When he feels like it... He was going to make us wait untill it gets published... but now he HAS to write more!
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Post by Justin-sama on Oct 1, 2006 13:33:45 GMT -5
Chapter III Bane's past “I was born over a thousand years ago. And on my 13th birthday I went for a walk late at night and met someone. She was beautiful. Her eyes a shining blue that caught me in her thrall. Her hair was the color of the sun, and it fell in ringlets around her face. We walked for a while, before I had seen her face, then she grasped my hand and stopped. She backed up into the light and I realized her beauty. The next thing I know, we were embracing in a passionate kiss. Then, she put her mouth to my neck and I realized she was a vampire. I said 'what if I'm not ready?' then we spoke, she had died the same age I was, she asked me if I would join her in eternity... I said yes, I loved her at first sight. We kissed again. Then she bit me and carried my limp body into the night.” Bane told everyone his story, how he had woken up to find her dying with a stake through her heart and had sworn to never die until she was avenged. “I will kill him. The man who killed her will pay with his heart and soul!” Bane said, his blood was burning hot now, hot with rage and revenge. “I carry this,” he held up a small bottle with red contents, “her life's blood that poured from her chest as she died, and this,” he held up a small bag, “this is the hand of the one who killed her so that I can find him with his blood.” “He is probably dead by now.” Syroth said to Bane. “The only reason me and Failon are still young is because of our magic, but I can bring your love back. I'll need the blood of her lover, you, the blood of the one that killed her, her blood, and the stake that killed her.” “I have the stake, and the man's blood, but I will kill him first and drain his life's blood into the spell.” Bane said. His blood began to boil. “He is near! I'll kill you!” Bane roared and stabbed a knife into his palm... Bane launched into the sky his blood swirled around him and formed wings in his back. He struck the one to kill her... to kill Cora. He ripped his hand from the demon and held the demon's heart... Epilogue Bane said the necessary words to activate the magic to imprison the demon as a minion for all eternity. “Kairn... Gifar... Sorak!” Bane roared as he thrust the heart back into the gaping hole. Bane took the blood he had spilled from the demon's heart and put it into a bottle. My love... You will return soon. “Bane, all we need now is your blood. Then we can resurrect Cora.” Syroth said as he combined the ingredients, stirring them with the wooden stake. Bane took a knife and sliced open his left wrist and let the blood seep from the wound to drip from his arm into the cauldron Syroth had conjured. “Spirit lost to us in ages past, come back and love and last...” Syroth began the incantation... Chapter IV Cora Cora rose from the bubbling liquid and climbed out of the cauldron. The moonlight shone on her skin revealing beauty in its finest. “Bane... I have returned... thank-you...” Cora said as she hugged Bane and cried profoundly. “What happened to you? You're not the Bane I know. You killed in wrath. You are different. Your blood burns hot.” “I have been bitten again. I am a Blood Beast.” Bane said holding Cora tightly. “And I am your guardian. I will protect you no matter what.” and with that Bane kissed Cora gently... Saria and Hoy-lii had found themselves in a trance of boredom so they left and looked for a bank or something to steal from. Unbeknownst to them, Raikell followed closely... This is way to easy... Raikell thought as he trailed them using magic and jutsu. At this rate I will surely die of boredom! Epilogue Again, really no epilogue here Volume IV Reunited Chapter I Guard Keep Kail'k, K'liak, Shokar, Nightfear, and Mikkie were the first to arrive at Guard Keep. They were followed immediately after by Yurak, Coyon, Noxus, and Seikell. Who in turn were followed by Syroth, Failon, Saria, Raikell, Hoy-lii, T'sarri, Bane, and Cora. “So, how'd everyone do?” K'liak asked. “We are never going to the abyss again!” Coyon yelled out immediately. “We met these three; Bane, Cora, and T'sarri.” Raikell pointed out, “and I learned magic.” “Shokar destroyed his hand with a new technique, we met this guy, Nightfear, and we learned that it really isn't pretty when me and K'liak die.” Kail'k said remembering how he woke up absolutely naked on a table in front of Mikkie... Epilogue “Raise your left hand. Now repeat after me. I vow to do my best, to defeat tyranny and destroy any and every caste system. This I so swear.” K'liak led Bane, Cora, T'sarri, and Nightfear through the oath of the Hunters... Book III War Chapter I Help No! They're going to catch me! Thought a young boy as he jumped through the streets of the town he was living in. * Shokar stepped out of the Rift and was hit squarely on the chest by a small child. “Help! They want to hurt me!” he pleaded. Shokar put the kid behind him and waited for whoever wanted the kid. Two men dressed in the black robes of the necromancers sped around the corner. “Out of our way! The boy is an experiment!” one yelled, he was slightly taller than Shokar who was now seventeen, had snow white hair, gaunt skin, and deep red eyes darker than blood. “No. I will not let you harm the weak. I have taken an oath to help those who need helped.” Shokar said coldly yet with an eerie warmth that only he could produce. The small child cowered behind Shokar and Kail'k came out of the Rift and walked to Shokar's right. He looked at the child and saw everything Shokar hadn't. The child had no shirt on and had a weird symbol on his chest, he had black hair with a white streak down the center, and blue, rebellious, fearful eyes. Mikkie stepped out of the Rift now and walked up to the boy and picked him up. “We won't let you hurt him!” she hissed scathingly. As K'liak stepped out of the Rift he looked not at all surprised. “You already got in trouble?” he asked calmly before he realized what was happening and spread his wings and flew up above the others holding his bow in his left hand. “One step closer and this arrow goes through your heart.” Titus started whimpering. These were people who would protect him even though they didn't him or who he was. The kind lady with the tail hugged him tightly and he felt safe in her grasp. Suddenly he was aware of a burning on his chest. He tried to stay quiet but failed and cried out in pain. Mikkie hear the small child cry out and looked at him and gasped. The symbol on his chest was glowing red and he was changing. His eyes changed from blue to black with a white spiral, horns grew from his head, his teeth turned to fangs, his fingers to claws, and his right arm started to become covered in scales. “No! You're letting him change!” The old looking necromancer yelled in dismay. Mikkie quickly turned and fled through the Rift. Kail'k will know where I am... she thought as she leaped through the Rift... Chapter II The Truth As Mikkie jumped through the Rift the necromancers pulled out their weapons and ran at Kail'k, K'liak, and Shokar. Shokar put one hand up and white fire leaped from his fingertips towards the necromancers surrounding them with rings of fire that would vanish once Shokar, Kail'k, and K'liak were safe. The three bolted for the Rift praying that they would be able to find Mikkie. Mikkie flew out of the Rift and landed perfectly, on thin air. “Oh... great.” Mikkie said calmly as she turned and tried to grab the ledge. Instead of the ledge Mikkie grabbed Kail'k's hand and was pulled up to the top of the cliff. The small child clung to her, he was starting to get larger now and was going to dwarf her soon. As Mikkie let go of the child he was six feet tall or taller. “Who are you?” Mikkie gasped. “I am Titus. This is the form I take when ever the mark burns, I call it Guilt. My true form is innocence.” the gigantic being said calmly as he started to shrink and change back to being a small boy. When Titus completely returned to his natural form he curled up in a ball and started to cry. “You hate me. Everyone hates me once they see the truth. Once they see him.” Titus sobbed as he started to hiccup. Just then the rest of the Hunters followed through the Rift and Failon walked to Titus. “No one hates you here. We're all different.” Failon cooed holding Titus in her arms as she tried to stop his tears...
and you do know shokar is based on me right? oh and I changed Enur's name to Syroth.
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Post by Anriasia on Oct 1, 2006 14:38:09 GMT -5
OH MY GOSH!!! YAY!!!! YOU WROTE MORE!!!
Yeah, Saria is psyconess, I'm Hoy'Lii, Shokar is justin, and Mikkie is Rye.
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Post by Justin-sama on Oct 1, 2006 14:47:56 GMT -5
sorry sam you spelled my name wrong so I edited your post so that it is right.
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Post by Anriasia on Oct 2, 2006 16:02:02 GMT -5
I did?! I'm sorry, what did I write?
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Post by Psychoness on Oct 3, 2006 15:39:44 GMT -5
YAY!
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I hate little kids.
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Post by Anriasia on Oct 3, 2006 20:13:07 GMT -5
Oh gosh Sara... ><
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Post by rage on Oct 3, 2006 20:45:19 GMT -5
Cool! ^^
Are you serious, you people are characters! That's awesome!
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Post by Anriasia on Oct 4, 2006 20:56:37 GMT -5
Yeah! -,^
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Post by Psychoness on Oct 5, 2006 16:29:31 GMT -5
I'm serious.
Little snoty brats who think I am their slave.
Maybe it's just the kids in Flint...
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Post by Anriasia on Oct 5, 2006 20:40:22 GMT -5
She meant are we seriously characters! xD
Besides, little kids are adorable! ^^
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Post by rage on Oct 7, 2006 9:00:36 GMT -5
My brother's not so adorable.
That's so cool!
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Post by Psychoness on Oct 7, 2006 9:06:16 GMT -5
I know sam.
And sorry, I don't find them cute.
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Post by Anriasia on Oct 7, 2006 9:06:51 GMT -5
How old is your brother?
I know! It is.
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Post by rage on Oct 15, 2006 8:09:24 GMT -5
Oh, hes almost 11...
>< It's torture... He almost killed my stuffy doggy... I had to sew him back together... Mom wouldn't let me kill my brother though...
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Post by Anriasia on Nov 5, 2006 11:02:48 GMT -5
Lol, Oh gosh...
Yeah, our Anime club is making fancomics, and one of them is Twins' Tale, after Justin lills off some of the characters xD
There were too many xD
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