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Post by wizardmon599 on Mar 11, 2006 22:50:13 GMT -5
Sorry about that,comrade...^^
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Post by greydreamland on Mar 11, 2006 23:09:34 GMT -5
Its okay Yuffie. No need to appologize...
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Post by wizardmon599 on Mar 11, 2006 23:41:30 GMT -5
Humph... Maybe I should try adding a bit of my poetry to the mix..?
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Post by Psychoness on Mar 12, 2006 8:22:16 GMT -5
Do that!! That would be awsome!!
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Post by wizardmon599 on Mar 12, 2006 12:56:35 GMT -5
I must find it,first...><
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Post by greydreamland on Mar 14, 2006 17:08:14 GMT -5
"Two Day Poem" Deperately I sought words to describe, none truly completly fit, all in vain But I hope you see I was in immense pain I know its not enough of an appology but blame this god forsaken rain I want you to know you are beautiful in every way; your presence keeps me sane.
You know what I think, you know how deeply I feel I will always be here to protect and heal. For you I will always keep close, I hold you dear I cannot wait until next year.
You know what I think, you know how deeply I feel I will always be here to protect and heal. For you I will always keep close, I hold you dear I cannot wait until next year.
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Post by Anriasia on Mar 15, 2006 18:47:15 GMT -5
that..........................
was...................................
AWESOME!!!!!
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Post by greydreamland on Mar 15, 2006 20:00:08 GMT -5
yea I gave Rikku a more detailed description of what it meant and she liked it even more. *digs up description*
"Two Day Poem" Deperately I sought words to describe, none truly completly fit, all in vain But I hope you see I was in immense pain I know its not enough of an appology but blame this god forsaken rain I want you to know you are beautiful in every way; your presence keeps me sane. {not part of the poem, but background...she asked whether i thought her dress was cute, i said yes it is nice. and she replied i dont know why i bother, i dont get the answer i want...but the reason i didnt say the truth was because it was raining heavily, and my shoulder was killing me, if you couldnt tell, i came to her two class periods later(first chance) and I told her pretty much what I have in this first stanza. That I think she is beautiful, and I love her more than anything or anyone.} For all the times I didn't say It burned and hurt inside in everyway. But you know all I want is everything to be okay For this I promise here, today. {also not part of the poem but more background...Because my shoulder was killing me I didnt copy the math notes, or the homework, so 4th hour I went to the library(were both students that hour) to get the notes and homework, and she said that if i told her how i really felt, and was completely honest I could. well i pretty much told her what the first stanza says..}
You know what I think, you know how deeply I feel I will always be here to protect and heal. For you I will always keep close, I hold you dear I cannot wait until next year. {same thing as the above two...erm. This one is basically all I feel, pretty forward. Next year being the year we both go to the same college.}
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Post by wizardmon599 on Mar 16, 2006 18:21:15 GMT -5
Oooohh... You're poetry never ceases to amaze me... It was so beautiful...!
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Post by Psychoness on Mar 16, 2006 19:28:21 GMT -5
Wow...
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Post by Anriasia on Mar 18, 2006 17:33:38 GMT -5
yeah...
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